Question

1．假如王輝是你的好朋友，請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇80詞左右的短文來介紹你的朋友．
要點：1．相似之處：都喜歡看喜劇片和脫口秀，都不喜歡紀(jì)錄片；喜歡吃蔬菜和肉，不喜歡吃魚；愛鍛煉，每周在一起踢二次足球．
2．不同之處：他比你更安靜，更嚴(yán)肅；你比他更外向，學(xué)習(xí)更努力．
3．你的好朋友名叫王輝．你們有很多共同的愛好，性格上又有一些區(qū)別．
4．請你談一點他需要改變的地方，并說明理由．
請不要遺漏要點，請不要逐條翻譯．
參考詞匯：1．difference 區(qū)別； 2．outgoing 外向；3．habit 愛好．
                                                       

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
We have something in common我們有些共同點．
have …in common有共同之處
【高分句型二】
I think he should be more outgoing．我認(rèn)為他應(yīng)該更外向一點．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．

解答 My best friend Wang Hui is a friendly and clever boy．We have something in common．【高分句型一】We have the same hobbies．We both like comedies and talk shows and don't like documentaries．We like meat and vegetables，and don't like eating fish．We like sports，we play soccer twice a week．（相似之處）However，we have some differences．He is quieter and more serious than me．I'm more outgoing than him．I study harder than him．（不同之處）I think he should be more outgoing．【高分句型二】Because if he is more outgoing，he can make more friends．（他需要改變的地方，并說明理由．）

點評 提綱類作文的要點都給了出來，在寫作的時候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點連接成一個整體．同時注意使用高級詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點．