Question

近年來廣場舞越來越流行。在公園、小區(qū)甚至一些空地旁常能看到跳舞的人們。上周, Helping Hands Club進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)問卷調(diào)查。請你根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇英語短文，并談一談對此事的看法。

贊 成：● 是健康的生活方式, 跳舞能鍛煉身體

● 可以結(jié)交有共同愛好的朋友

● 人人都有權(quán)利(right)在廣場和空地等公共場所開展活動(dòng)

反 對：● 音樂聲音太大，影響附近居民的正常生活

● 媒體報(bào)道噪音擾民引起打架傷人

你的看法：● ……

要求：1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包含以上信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2. 自擬你對廣場舞現(xiàn)象的看法，不少于兩點(diǎn)。

3. 文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

4. 語句通順，語法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整。

5. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。

Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years. It is often seen at squares, parks or even open spaces. Last week Helping Hands Club made a survey on square dancing.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years. It is often seen at squares, parks or even open spaces. Last week Helping Hands Club made a survey on square dancing.

Some people thought everyone has the right to have activities in public places. It is a good way to take exercise. What’s more, they can make more friends who share the same hobby. But other people disagreed. They complained that noisy music had a bad effect on people’s study and life though square dancing is a kind of healthy lifestyle. Some newspapers said fights happened between citizens and dancers because of this.

In my opinion, it is necessary to take actions to solve the problem. Dancers should turn down the loudspeakers and should not dance till too late at night. If people can understand each other, we will live in a happy and harmony life.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)應(yīng)根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容正確地表述贊成反對的觀點(diǎn)，并且要正確闡述自己對此事的看法。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，先表達(dá)贊成的觀點(diǎn)，再表達(dá)反對的觀點(diǎn)，最后表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。同時(shí)文章銜接連貫，運(yùn)用了what’s more, but, in my opinion等連詞進(jìn)行銜接。同時(shí)，本文中運(yùn)用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:It’s a good way to do, between…and…, take actions等。文章還運(yùn)用了定語從句。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。