Question

假如你是Tom，你的同學Li Hua在上周的英語考試中失敗了，她的心情很不好。請你給她寫一封信安慰她，讓她早日有一個好心情。根據(jù)以下提示詞，寫一篇80個單詞左右的短文。

提示詞：fail , unhappy, spend ----on , talk with --- , do sports, learn to smile ,believe---

Dear Li Hua,

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Yours,

Tom

 

Answer 1

Dear Li Hua,

I am sorry to hear that you are unhappy because of failing the English exam .I would like to give you some advice .First, you should study hard at your lessons and spend more time on taking grammar notes in every class ,Second ,you’d better talk with your teacher about your problems.Third ,you should do more sports to keep healthy .Finally ,you are supposed to learn to smile when you are in trouble.If you do these things ,I believe you will feel relaxed and get good grades .

Wish you good luck !
Yours,

Tom

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。所給材料要點突出，提示詞把這些要點用正確的英語表達出來。行文前要認真閱讀材料，把握要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料要求，這是一篇書信作文，因此要注意書信的格式。結(jié)合內(nèi)容可知，要給收信人一些建議。寫作中適當使用序數(shù)詞，使上下文條理清楚，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如：I am sorry to hear that---我很遺憾地聽說……,I would like to---我想……，You should/You’d better/You are supposed to---你應該、你最好……等。另外，文中還適當使用了序數(shù)詞，使文章更有條理，邏輯關系更強。

考點：話題作文。