Question

書面表達(dá)（本大題共10分）
假設(shè)你是Tom, 你的朋友Millie遇到了一些問(wèn)題，想聽聽你的意見。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，回一封信給Millie，幫助她解決問(wèn)題。
要點(diǎn)：1. 你了解到Millie在學(xué)習(xí)大部分功課上挺費(fèi)勁。
2. 她經(jīng)常被同學(xué)看不起，沒(méi)有親密的朋友可以交談。
3. 她的父母只關(guān)心分?jǐn)?shù)，阻止她放學(xué)后打排球。她很不開心。
4. 建議------
注意：1. 第4要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用3-4句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Millie,
I’m glad to receive your letter. I know that you _________________________________________
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I hope my advice will be of some value to you.
Best wishes
Tom

Answer 1

Dear Millie,
I’m glad to receive your letter. I know that you have great difficulty learning most of your lessons. You are often looked down on by your classmates. You also have no close friends to talk to. Your parents care only about your marks. They prevent/ stop you playing volleyball after school. You are very unhappy. I hope you will study harder to make great progress in your lessons. You should have more communication with your parents and talk to them about your problems. You can try to make friends with your classmates, too. (You can spend some time on your hobbies, but you should achieve a balance between study and hobbies.)
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試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封回信。本題給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，確定寫作內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，寫作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。