Question

10．你身邊一定充滿著愛，如父母的愛、老師的愛以及同學(xué)的愛等． 假設(shè)某英文報刊正在舉辦主題為"愛要大聲說出來"的征文活動，請你根據(jù)下面提供的信息，以Love around me 為題 些一篇英語短文．詞數(shù)80詞左右．
內(nèi)容包括：
1．舉例描述父母的愛、老師的愛和同學(xué)的愛；
2．表達(dá)對這些"愛"的回報；
3．表達(dá)對"世界充滿愛"的憧憬．
Love around me
                                                                   

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 when I was playing football with my classmates on the playground，I fell down and hurt my legs badly．當(dāng)我和同學(xué)在操場上踢足球時，我摔倒了，嚴(yán)重地傷了腿．這是when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，當(dāng)…時候．
 高分句型二
 If everyone gives a little love，the world will be a more beautiful place．如果每個人都獻(xiàn)出一點(diǎn)愛，世界將會更美．這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句是一般將來時，從句用的是一般現(xiàn)在時．

解答 Love around me 
There is a lot of love around us． One day，when I was playing football with my classmates on the playground，I fell down and hurt my legs badly【高分句型一，注意時間狀語從句的使用】．My classmates took me to the hospital at once．During my stay in bed，some of my classmates came to see me and helped me with my lessons．So I caught up with others soon after I came back to school and passed all the exams【要點(diǎn)一，舉例描述同學(xué)的愛】．I was so grateful．Love is giving and love is paying attention to others．Thanks to my classmates，I will do my best to give all my love to others．【要點(diǎn)二，表達(dá)對這些"愛"的回報】If everyone gives a little love，the world will be a more beautiful place．【高分句型二，注意if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句的使用】【要點(diǎn)三，表達(dá)對"世界充滿愛"的憧憬】

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