Question

20．你喜歡旅游嗎？我們的祖國地大物博，有著很多讓人流連忘返的美麗景觀．你去過的那些地方中，你最喜歡哪里？請你用英語寫一篇短文，介紹一處給你留下深刻印象的自然景觀或旅游圣地．
題目自擬，短文不得少于80個單詞．
There are many places of interest in Beijing．And my favorite one is the Great Wall．We visited it last summer．The Great Wall is considered as one of the seven wonders of the world．．It's about six or seven metres high and fouror five metres wide．It has a long history of 2，500 years．It was built by the Ancient Chinese workingpeople．When we stood on it，we saw around．There are mountains around it．It looked like a huge
dragon．It's so famous that many people coming from every parts of the world
visit it．The Great Wall is the pride of our nation．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
There are many places of interest in Beijing．北京有許多名勝古跡．這是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
It's so famous that many people coming from every parts of the world visit it它是如此著名，以至于許多來自世界各地的人去參觀它．so …that如此…以至于．

解答 There are many places of interest in Beijing【高分句型一，注意there be句型的使用】．And my favorite one is the Great Wall．We visited it last summer．【開頭點明主題】The Great Wall is considered as one of the seven wonders of the world．It's about six or seven metres high and four or five metres wide．It has a long history of 2，500 years．It was built by the Ancient Chinese working people．When we stood on it，we saw around．There are mountains around it．It looked like a huge dragon．It's so famous that many people coming from every parts of the world visit it【高分句型二，注意時so …that的使用】．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹長城】The Great Wall is the pride of our nation．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．