Question

11．生活像一只快樂的小船，承載著無數(shù)的歡聲笑語．請以"A Happy Day"為題，寫一篇短文．
要求：1．描述你經(jīng)歷過的一件快樂的事；2．包括事件發(fā)生的時(shí)間、天氣、地點(diǎn)、具體經(jīng)過，亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3.60-80個(gè)詞．
A Happy Day
My uncle lives in the country．Last fall，there was an apple harvest on his farm．He invited my family to
taste the apples．On a sunny morning，my family drove to the farm．After we got there，I couldn't wait to pick
a big and red apple on the tree．The apple tasted so sweet．Then we picked apples．In the afternoon，we had a
big meal there．I thought it was delicious．I was very happy on that day!．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
there was an apple harvest on his farm．他的農(nóng)場上蘋果該收獲了．這是一個(gè)there be句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
I thought it was delicious．我覺得很好吃．這是一個(gè)賓語從句，主句是I thought，是一般過去時(shí)，從句是 it was delicious，注意從句的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該和主句一致．

解答 A Happy Day 
     My uncle lives in the country．Last fall，there was an apple harvest on his farm【高分句型一，注意there be句型的使用】．He invited my family to taste the apples【開頭點(diǎn)明主題】．On a sunny morning，my family drove to the farm．After we got there，I couldn't wait to pick a big and red  apple on the tree．The apple tasted so sweet．Then we picked apples．In the afternoon，we had a big meal there．I thought it was delicious【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】．【正文部分介紹這一天的活動(dòng)】I was very happy on that day!【結(jié)尾部分緊扣主題】

點(diǎn)評 動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯(cuò)誤．