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5．暑假即將來(lái)臨，對(duì)于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個(gè)假期，家長(zhǎng)們孩子們都有各自的想法．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，同時(shí)寫(xiě)出你自己對(duì)暑假的安排．

父母的主 意	1．花些時(shí)間在家學(xué)習(xí)，為接下來(lái)的高中（high school）做準(zhǔn)備，畢竟學(xué)習(xí)是很重要的事；  2．和父母多交流，幫父母做一些家務(wù)；
孩子的主意	1．好好放松休息一下； 2．和同學(xué)去觀光；
你的主意	…

注意：
1．詞數(shù)：80-l00；
2．應(yīng)包含表格中的觀點(diǎn)，不能逐字逐句翻譯，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫．
How will you spend the coming summer vocation
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：At the same time，parents hope that the children can communicate well with them同時(shí)，家長(zhǎng)希望孩子們能和他們好好交流．At the same time同時(shí)；后面是由hope引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句；communicate well with sb．與某人很好地交流．
高分句型二：All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy只會(huì)用功不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻．這是一句英語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用，使文章更具說(shuō)服力．

解答 Summer vacation is just around the corner，parents and children always have great differences in how they shall spend their holidays．Parents want their children to put their time and energy on study so that they can prepare well for their high school，and do some homework and housework．At the same time，parents hope that the children can communicate well with them．（高分句型一）（父母的主意）Most of us think that the holiday is to allow ourselves to relax and go sightseeing with our classmates．（孩子的主意）In my opinion，we children can have a talk with our parents．All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．（高分句型二） We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school．（我的主意）

點(diǎn)評(píng) （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺(jué)得乏味．（2）適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句．（3）進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時(shí)，適當(dāng)使用定語(yǔ)從句．（4）適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語(yǔ)，烘托謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．