Question

17．班級(jí)英語黑板報(bào)正在征稿，請(qǐng)按照以下要求用英語寫一篇文章投稿．
（1）描述你什么時(shí)候、和什么人一起做過的某件事情；
（2）談?wù)勛隽诉@件事情后你的感想．
注意：（1）60字左右；
（2）文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透露考生真實(shí)身份的任何信息．Working as volunteer
My father is a kind-heart man．He is a teacher，and he also is a volunteer．
（事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間、人，地點(diǎn)）One Sunday，My father took me outside．He did not tell me where to go，nor what to do．（事情開展的過程）He first took me to buy some tools and some books．I wondered why he bought these for me because most of them were not suitable to me．I knew these tools were children until we came into the orphanage．My father came here for working as volunteer．He asked me to help him to send the books and tools to the children．Then we played games with the children．When we went back home，all children said thanks to us．
（我對(duì)本次事情的感受）Although my father did not give the tools and books to me，he gave me something more important．I am proud of my father．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容為描述曾經(jīng)做過的一件事及自己的收獲．時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)．人稱為第三人稱．寫作要點(diǎn)：1．事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間、人，地點(diǎn) 2．事情開展的過程 3．我對(duì)本次事情的感受．常用的重點(diǎn)句型和短語：kind-hearted，until，help sb do sth，be proud of等

解答 Working as volunteer 
My father is a kind-heart man．He is a teacher，and he also is a volunteer．
（事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間、人，地點(diǎn)）One Sunday，My father took me outside．He did not tell me where to go，nor what to do．（事情開展的過程）He first took me to buy some tools and some books．I wondered why he bought these for me because most of them were not suitable to me．I knew these tools were children until we came into the orphanage．My father came here for working as volunteer．He asked me to help him to send the books and tools to the children．Then we played games with the children．When we went back home，all children said thanks to us．
（我對(duì)本次事情的感受）Although my father did not give the tools and books to me，he gave me something more important．I am proud of my father．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 該篇提綱類作文對(duì)考生的限制很少，考生可根據(jù)自己最擅長的某次事情展開作文．在組織文章時(shí)要交代清楚開展的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、如何開展以及自己的收獲等信息．日常的學(xué)習(xí)中多積累些短語和句型，在作文時(shí)將會(huì)幫助考生展開思路，也能使文章增色不少．