Question

10．根據(jù)以下信息，用英文寫一篇介紹Peter的短文．（短文開頭已給出）
要點(diǎn)如下：
1、Peter是一名14歲的學(xué)生．他會唱歌、拉小提琴，所以他想?yún)⒓右魳肪銟凡浚?br />2、Peter喜歡動物，他認(rèn)為狗很友好、聰明，熊貓可愛；
3、他每天早晨6：10起床，乘坐公汽上學(xué)，路上通常花半個小時；
4、這兒有一張他的照片．看，他和弟弟正在用電腦．爸爸正在看報紙．這是快樂的一家人．
要求：
1．詞數(shù)60-70詞左右；
2．要求包括內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語句通順，意思連貫．
This is my good friend．
His name is Peter．He is 14 years old．He can sing and play the violin and he is good at them．So he wants to join the music club．Peter loves animals．He thinks dogs are friendly and smart．Pandas are cute．They are our friends．Peter gets up at 6 o'clock in the morning．It takes about half an hour to get to school by bus．
Here is his photo．Look!His brother and he are using a computer．His dadis reading a newspaper．This is a happy family．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
He thinks dogs are friendly and smart Pandas are cute．他認(rèn)為狗是友好和聰明的熊貓是可愛的．這是一個賓語從句，He thinks 是主句，后面的是賓語從句．
高分句型二
His brother and he are using a computer．他的哥哥和他正在使用電腦．這是現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時，表示正在做某事．

解答 This is my good friend．His name is Peter．He is 14 years old．He can sing and play the violin and he is good at them．So he wants to join the music club【要點(diǎn)一，Peter是一名14歲的學(xué)生．他會唱歌、拉小提琴，所以他想?yún)⒓右魳肪銟凡浚弧浚甈eter loves animals．He thinks dogs are friendly and smart Pandas are cute．【高分句型一，注意賓語從句的使用】They are our friends．【要點(diǎn)二，Peter喜歡動物，他認(rèn)為狗很友好、聰明，熊貓可愛】Peter gets up at 6 o'clock in the morning．It takes about half an hour to get to school by bus．【要點(diǎn)二，他每天早晨6：10起床，乘坐公汽上學(xué)，路上通�；ò雮�小時】
Here is his photo．Look!His brother and he are using a computer【高分句型二，注意現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時使用】．His dad is reading a newspaper．This is a happy family．【要點(diǎn)三，皮特的照片】

點(diǎn)評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．