Question

3．I'm proud ofOne Thing I'm Proud of
I still remember how I became a good table tennis player．
The first day I went to high school，I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis．Amazed at how skillful they were，I was determined to be just as good．Later on，I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques．Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players．At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class．
I am really proud of this experience，because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work．It also helps me better understand the proverb"Practice makes perfect"．
Li Yue
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Answer 1

分析 重點(diǎn)短語：
1．At the end of the term 在學(xué)期末
2．through hard work通過努力
3．Practice makes perfect熟能生巧
高分句型：
【高分句型】1．The first day I went to high school，I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis．
我上中學(xué)的第一天，看見我的一些同學(xué)在打乒乓球．（see sb．doing sth．看見某人正在做某事）
【高分句型】2．Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players．
我堅(jiān)持練習(xí)，直到很自信地挑戰(zhàn)優(yōu)秀選手．（keep doing堅(jiān)持做某事）

解答 One Thing I'm Proud of
I still remember how I became a good table tennis player．
The first day I went to high school，I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis【高分句型】．Amazed at how skillful they were，I was determined to be just as good．Later on，I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques．Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players【高分句型】．At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class．
  I am really proud of this experience，because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work．It also helps me better understand the proverb"Practice makes perfect"．
Li Yue

點(diǎn)評(píng) 解答這種題目時(shí)，我們應(yīng)該仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)． 要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫． 根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣． 在平常的學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，讓文章更出彩．