Question

你知道由于環(huán)境污染、人類的殘殺，很多野生動(dòng)物瀕臨滅絕。請以How to protect wildlife animals為題，用英語寫一篇短文，說明保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的重要性以及怎樣保護(hù)他們。內(nèi)容包括：
1.為什么有些野生動(dòng)物處于危險(xiǎn)中。
2.為什么保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物很重要。
3.我們應(yīng)該采取什么措施來保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。
2.語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。
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Answer 1

One possible version：
How to protect wildlife animals
Many wild animals are in danger, because the environment that they are living in has changed a lot. For example, with the development of cities ,the air is polluted and water is not clean any more, wild animals’ living places are also polluted badly. Many of them don’t have enough food to eat. At the same time, many people kill some special animals for their fur, skin, teeth and meat.
As we all know, animals are our friends,Human beings can’t live without plants and animals. We should plant more trees to make homes for wild animals and stop animals from being killed. If there are more plants and more wildlife animals, the world will be more beautiful . So protecting wildlife animals is very important, Let’s work together to protect the wildlife animals.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹為什么有些野生動(dòng)物處于危險(xiǎn)中,為什么保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物很重要,我們應(yīng)該采取什么措施來保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。.如in danger, has changed a lot, with the development of cities, stop animals from being killed等。At the same time, As we all know等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。