Question

14．臨近畢業(yè)，學校要求每個初三學生寫封信給各個家長，簡要匯報三年來初中生活的收獲與存在問題．假如你是Jim，請根據(jù)下表的內容提示，用英文做一個簡短的匯報．

收  獲	1．學到很多知識，提高了學習技能． 2．了解到許多名人及他們的事跡．（舉1-2個例子，參考人名：Spud，Tan Dun，Armstrong，Marie Curie，Audrey Hepburn…） 3．學會做人：在校與老師、同學和睦相處，互相幫助；在家…；在上學途中，遵守交通規(guī)則，能…；遇到困難時，能…
存在問題	學習壓力（feel stressed in…）大，…（舉1-2個例子）
目前想法	1．感謝… 2．打算（怎樣處理存在的問題）

要    求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括表格中所有的相關信息，并適當發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；
4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等．
Dear Dad & Mum，
I will leave junior school and meet a new challenge of my life．Now I would like tell you what I have done in the past three years．
                                                                  
Yours Sincerely
Jim．

Answer 1

分析 ①高分句型：Now I would like to tell you what I have learnt in the past three years．現(xiàn)在我想告訴你在過去的三年里我所學到的東西．句子中would like to do sth想做某事，what I have learnt 在這里作tell的賓語，構成賓語從句，in the past three years在過去的三年里．
②I have too much homework to do every day每天我有太多的作業(yè)要做．句子中too much太多，修飾不可數(shù)名詞homework，to do作后置定語，修飾homework，every day每天．

解答 Dear Dad & Mum，
I will leave junior school and meet a new challenge of my life．Now I would like to tell you what I have learnt in the past three years．（高分句型）（引出話題）
I have learnt a lot of knowledge from the books and I have improved my study skills．I have learnt a lot of famous people all over the world．Spud's story tells us not to give up when we do anything．（Tan Dun is a great musician．He said his music is to dream without boundaries．）I can also get along with my teachers and classmates．We learn from each other and help each other，too．At home I can do some housework so that you can have more time to rest．On my way to school，I can obey the traffic rules．I can help old men cross the road．When I meet difficulty，I can talk to my friends/teachers/you about it．（在校收獲）
Now I feel stressed in my study．I can't get enough sleep．I have too much homework to do every day．（高分句型）I have no time for my hobbies．（存在問題）
would thank you for taking good care of me and thank my teachers and friends for their help．I will plan my time well to study better and sleep well/make my study and my body better．（目前想法）
Yours Sincerely
Jim

點評 寫作時要注意遣詞造句，不能受漢語的影響，要用地道的英語表達，注意時態(tài)，語態(tài)，單詞拼寫，語法等問題，用好簡單句，適當用復雜句．可以用一些高級詞匯．還要注意句子的關聯(lián)．另外這篇文章還有要求寫出自己的感受，這是開放的部分，要學生自己展開想象，組織語言，給出理由．