Question

隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物已經(jīng)成為一種新型的購(gòu)物方式。某英文報(bào)以“shopping on line”為話題進(jìn)行征文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示，談?wù)劸W(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的利與弊并發(fā)表你自己的看法。
要求：1．語(yǔ)句流暢，書寫規(guī)范。
2．包含提示內(nèi)容，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
3．詞數(shù)不少于80個(gè)詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Advantages	1．方便的（convenient） 2．24小時(shí)營(yíng)業(yè) 3．不用排隊(duì)
Disadvantages	1．看不見(jiàn)物品，容易受到欺騙（be cheated） 2．不能享受和朋友一起購(gòu)物的樂(lè)趣
Your opinion	……

Shopping on line is quite popular in our daily life now. ______________________________
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. There are some advantages, especially for busy people. If you shop online, you needn't wait in line. It opens 24 hours, which is very convenient for you. However, it also has some disadvantages. Because you can't see the real things you want to buy, you are easily cheated. What's more, you can't enjoy shopping time in shopping malls with your friends.
In my opinion, everything has two sides. Whether shopping online depends on your time. If you have time, it's better for you to go to streets to do some shopping because you can see and touch the real things. If you are too busy, it's a good idea to shop online, but you can choose to pay after you get what you want to buy.

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的利與弊，對(duì)于所給提示，要好好組織語(yǔ)言材料，不要有畏難心理，最后不要忘了發(fā)表自己的看法。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不僅網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的利與弊是注意避免句式重復(fù)，而且使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)及定語(yǔ)從句，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如，wait in line. enjoy shopping time in shopping malls with your friends everything has two sides Because you can't see the real things you want to buy,等，What's more等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。