Question

在過去三年的學習和生活中，你一定得到過很多人的幫助和關(guān)愛，此時此刻你會有很多感謝的話要說。請根據(jù)下面所給的提示用英語寫一篇短文。

感謝	父母（給我提供幸福的生活，為我做了很多事情） 老師（辛勤工作；對我嚴格要求，讓我努力學習） 同學（讓我減少孤獨，明白友誼的重要性；無法忘記一起度過的日子）
祝福	所有人身體健康、好運。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)60-80詞，圍繞主題可適當發(fā)揮；
2. 文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名和校名。
參考詞匯：友誼的重要性 the importance of friendship, 嚴格要求 be strict with…
In my life, I get lots of help and love from many people. Now I want to express my thanks to them.                                                         

Answer 1

In my life, I get lots of help and love from many people. Now I want to express my thanks to them. First, I want to thank my parents. They provide a happy life for me. They do much for me. Second, I want to thank my teachers. They are working hard. They are strict with me and they make me study hard. Third, I want to thank my classmates. They make me feel less lonely and know the importance of the friendship. I will never forget the days we played and studied together.
Thank you, my parents, my teachers and my classmates. I hope you are in good health and have a better future.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，可以適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，本文的主語可以用第一人稱，時態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時。為了是表達更有邏輯性，可以使用序數(shù)詞，連接詞等。
點評：此類作為首先要做的就是認真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分數(shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時就會有法可依。