Question

南京人民正如火如荼地為青奧會做準(zhǔn)備，為了鼓勵(lì)更多青年人為青奧做貢獻(xiàn)，更好地展現(xiàn)青年學(xué)生的風(fēng)采，青奧組委會向南京的學(xué)校招募一批青奧文化代表�，F(xiàn)請你以七年級1班的名義給青奧組委會寫一封80詞左右的推薦信，推薦本班的班長Simon同學(xué)當(dāng)選“青奧文化代表”（the Cultural Representative of the YOG），要求如下：

著重介紹Simon的品質(zhì)、能力、愛好與特長，以及他能為青奧會所做的貢獻(xiàn)；

文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)學(xué)校、姓名等真實(shí)信息。

A Recommendation Letter

Dear Sir/ Madam,

 

 

 

Yours faithfully

Class 1, Grade 7

 

Answer 1

A Recommendation Letter

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am from Class 1, Grade 7.We are very happy and looking forward to the Youth Games. We all hope the Youth Games will be a big success. Let’s try to do something for 2014 Nanjing Youth Games!

Simon is our monitor. He wants to be a Cultural Representative of the YOG. He is kind and often helps others. He is good at sports.He is on our school basketball team.They often play against other teams. He speaks English very well..He can help the friends from foreign countries better. He wants to make a contribution to 2014 Nanjing Youth Games. I hope his wish can come true.

Yours faithfully

Class 1, Grade 7

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇緊跟形勢的作文，2014年青奧會的召開，牽動(dòng)著每個(gè)中國人的心，我們要積極為青奧做貢獻(xiàn)。更好地展現(xiàn)青年學(xué)生的風(fēng)采，青奧組委會向南京的學(xué)校招募一批青奧文化代表。推薦Simon同學(xué)當(dāng)選“青奧文化代表”，要更好地介紹Simon的品質(zhì)、能力、愛好與特長，以及他能為青奧會所做的貢獻(xiàn)。主要圍繞與Simon有關(guān)的內(nèi)容展開寫作。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇作文引入正題之后，緊緊圍繞Simon的品質(zhì)、能力、愛好與特長，以及他能為青奧會所做的貢獻(xiàn)來寫。符合題意要求，表達(dá)完整，條理清楚，語句通順，語言正確無誤。文中還用到了不少短語：looking forward to；try to do something；is good at；play against；make a contribution to；come true等，為作文增添了色彩。

考點(diǎn)：提示性作文。