Question

5．親愛(ài)的同學(xué)們，作為00后的初中生，你們是我們祖國(guó)的未來(lái)，但你們也有自己的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)．請(qǐng)以"We Are Post-00Students"為題寫(xiě)一篇短文參加學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)作文競(jìng)賽．請(qǐng)按照下表兩個(gè)方面進(jìn)行客觀的描述，然后制定個(gè)人將來(lái)的目標(biāo)和計(jì)劃．
注意事項(xiàng)：1.80詞左右（文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；
3．文章必須包括表格中所提供的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
We Are Post-00Students
As post-00students，we are the hope of our country．However，we also have our advantages
and disadvantages．
On the one hand，we have lots of advantages．Most of us are helpful．We'll try our best to help others if they are in trouble．We're also active enough to be interested in new things．What's more，we're confident．We're sure we can do anything if we never give up．
On the other hand，we still have some disadvantages．Sometimes we get excited and angry easily．And we often make the same mistakes because of carelessness．We think of ourselves more than others
My dream is to be one of the top students in my class．I believe I can realize my dream through hard work．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
We'll try our best to help others if they are in trouble別人有困難我們會(huì)盡力幫助．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句．
【高分句型二】
And we often make the same mistakes because of carelessness因?yàn)榇中奈覀兛偸欠竿瑯拥腻e(cuò)誤．
because of 因?yàn)?/p>

解答 We Are Post-00 Students
As post-00 students，we are the hope of our country．However，we also have our advantages and disadvantages．
On the one hand，we have lots of  advantages．Most of us are helpful．We'll try our best to help others if they are in trouble．【高分句型一】We're also active enough to be interested in new things．What's more，we're confident．We're sure we can do anything if we never give up．（優(yōu)點(diǎn)）
On the other hand，we still have some disadvantages．Sometimes we get excited and angry easily．And we often make the same mistakes because of carelessness．【高分句型二】We think of ourselves more than others．（缺點(diǎn)）
  My dream is to be one of  the top students in my class．I believe I can realize my dream through hard work．（將來(lái)的目標(biāo)和計(jì)劃）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)作要抓住要點(diǎn)．要在"準(zhǔn)"字上下功夫．在寫(xiě)作中注意人稱(chēng)與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面．在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫(xiě)的好的句子要進(jìn)行默寫(xiě)，這樣在寫(xiě)作時(shí)就能寫(xiě)出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文．