提示:馬上就要初中畢業(yè)了,你有沒(méi)有想過(guò)白己將來(lái)要干什么?你的理想是什么?
請(qǐng)以1 want to be..為題,寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。
要點(diǎn):1.你的理想是什么?
2.你將如何實(shí)現(xiàn)你I向理想?
要求:1.短文應(yīng)包括所有要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2.語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫;
3.文中不可出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名和校名

I want to be an English teacher
I want to be an English teacher when I grow up. Firstly, I like English. I want to use it often in my daily life. Secondly, I like working with students, and enjoy being asked questions and answering them. Thirdly, I’m good at English. So I can teach my students the right way to learn English.
Now what I should do is to study hard and get high marks in English tests, and try to practice speaking English as much as possible. Only in this way can I realize my dream of being an English teacher one day.

試題分析:這是一篇命題作文,要求我們以I want to  be…為題寫(xiě)一寫(xiě)自己畢業(yè)以后的理想。作文應(yīng)該有三個(gè)要點(diǎn),一是點(diǎn)明自己的理想是什么;二要陳述自己有這個(gè)夢(mèng)想的原因;三是如何來(lái)實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的這個(gè)理想。在分析要點(diǎn)時(shí),我們要注意將自己有這個(gè)理想的原因說(shuō)清楚,這應(yīng)該是作文中重要的一部分,并且這一部分是需要自己發(fā)揮想象力,來(lái)補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明的。這一話題也是學(xué)生們較為熟悉的,他們應(yīng)該是有話可說(shuō),并且相關(guān)的句型也較熟悉。通過(guò)審題可知,這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),第一人稱(chēng),因此句中動(dòng)詞的形式很簡(jiǎn)單,不會(huì)出現(xiàn)什么錯(cuò)誤。但是我們要注意多使用一些好的句型、句式,以使文章表達(dá)流暢,有節(jié)奏感。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。作者告訴了我們自己長(zhǎng)大后的理想,并且從三個(gè)方面表述了自己有這個(gè)夢(mèng)想的原因,最后寫(xiě)了自己想怎樣來(lái)實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想,內(nèi)容很完整,結(jié)構(gòu)也很合理。短文中,作者發(fā)揮了自己的英語(yǔ)才能,使這篇短文的內(nèi)容很豐富。如在提到自己為什么想要成為一名英語(yǔ)老師的時(shí)候,他給了我們?nèi)齻(gè)理由。這三個(gè)理由都很貼合文意,很合理。他使用了表示順序的詞,使這一部分很有條理。短文中用到的好的句型有I like working with students, and enjoy being asked questions and answering them.、So I can teach my students the right way to learn English.、Now what I should do is to study hard and get high marks in English tests、Only in this way can I realize my dream of being an English teacher one day. 這些動(dòng)名詞、主語(yǔ)從句、動(dòng)詞不定式和倒裝的使用,使文章表達(dá)很流暢。
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