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8．以The Person I Admire Most為題介紹你的叔叔．要求語(yǔ)句通順，條理清楚，要點(diǎn)齊全，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右．
1．精力充沛，謙虛，自信．最喜歡的顏色是綠色，因?yàn)椤?br />2．是一名音樂(lè)教師，擅長(zhǎng)彈吉他，經(jīng)常熬夜創(chuàng)作音樂(lè)，他認(rèn)為最好的音樂(lè)來(lái)自于生活．曾
經(jīng)想做一名世界聞名的音樂(lè)家．
3．樂(lè)于助人，比如：…
4．對(duì)我影響很大，決心學(xué)習(xí)他的精神，盡我最大的努力學(xué)習(xí)不同的音樂(lè)，在下一次的學(xué)校
藝術(shù)節(jié)上獲得第一名．并做一名充滿愛(ài)心的人．
The Person I Admire Most
                                                                

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
His favorite color is green because he thinks green represents peace．他最喜歡的顏色是綠色，因?yàn)樗�認(rèn)為綠色代表和平．這是because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，因?yàn)椤��?br />高分句型二
he thinks the best music comes from life．他認(rèn)為最好的音樂(lè)來(lái)自生活．這是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，he thinks 是主句，后面的是賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 The Person I Admire Most
The person I admire most is my uncle【開(kāi)頭點(diǎn)明主題】．He is energetic，modest and confident．His favorite color is green because he thinks green represents peace【高分句型一，注意狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】．He is a music teacher and good at playing the guitar，he often stays up late to create music，he thinks the best music comes from life【高分句型二，注意賓語(yǔ)從句的使用】，he wants to be a world-famous musician．He is ready to help others，he often helps people in need．He has a great influence on me，I decided to learn his spirit，I will do my best to learn different music to  get the first place in the next school art festival【正文部分詳細(xì)叔叔及對(duì)我的影響】，I think I will be a loving person like my uncle．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

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