Question

目前中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重，壓力大，而豐富多彩的業(yè)余生活，有利于開(kāi)拓視野，調(diào)節(jié)身心，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率。請(qǐng)以“My Spare Time”為題，寫(xiě)一篇作文談?wù)勀愕臉I(yè)余生活，如看書(shū)、看電視、玩電腦、做運(yùn)動(dòng)、做家務(wù)等。請(qǐng)將答案填寫(xiě)在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置。
寫(xiě)作要求：
1.包含提示所給要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言流暢，意思連貫，不必逐字逐句翻譯，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮拓展；
2.詞數(shù)80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
My Spare Time
I am a middle school student. Though I ’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful. _______________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

My Spare Time
I am a middle school student. Though I ’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful. After school I usually play sports. I like basketball and football very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and study better. I often do some reading in the evening. I think books are our best friends. They give us much knowledge that we can’t learn at school. So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time. Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet. I find it’s a good way to relax myself. At the same time it can also help me to open up my eyes to the outside world. On weekends, I often help my parents with the housework. I sweep the floor, wash the clothes and learn to cook. I enjoy myself in my spare time.

試題分析：此題是命題式作文，要求根據(jù)提示及所給材料以My Spare Time為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)作文，主要考查寫(xiě)作能力，也是對(duì)英語(yǔ)綜合知識(shí)運(yùn)用的考查，這就要求仔細(xì)分析所給提示，不要漏掉提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫(xiě)出語(yǔ)言流暢，意思連貫的文章。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章語(yǔ)言連貫，簡(jiǎn)潔明了。在文章中使用不少?gòu)?fù)合句和固定短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，同時(shí)也體現(xiàn)出作者的寫(xiě)作功底。例如：Though I ’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful.（雖然我很忙，但我的業(yè)余時(shí)間仍然是豐富多彩）；They give us much knowledge that we can’t learn at school.（它們給我們很多在學(xué)校學(xué)不到的知識(shí)）；I find it’s a good way to relax myself.（我發(fā)現(xiàn)這是自我放松的一個(gè)好方式）；以及be busy with,help sb. with/(to) do sth.等。