Question

書面表達 （15分 ）

本學期即將結束，寒假即將開始。假如你是Linda，請你給你的美國朋友Sally寫一封信告訴她你的學校生活好嗎？文中請?zhí)岬侥愕膶W校飲食、運動、學科及對它們的印象等。字數：60-80。

My school life

Dear Sally,

Nice to write to you again.

Answer 1

Dear Sally,

Nice to write to you again. Now let me tell you about my school life. I like to eat hamburgers, chicken and vegetables at school. They are good for me. I play sports for about two hours every day. I often play tennis and volleyball with my friends. They are difficult but interesting. I have some subjects every day. My favorite subjects are music and biology. Music is interesting. I can sing many songs. Biology is fun and useful. I like my school life.

Best wishes,

Linda

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們給美國朋友Sally寫一封信告訴她我們的學校生活。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作內容，主要包括學校飲食、運動、學科及對它們的印象。主要內容雖然已經給出，但是很多其他內容都需要我們自己去充實，讓它變得完整、合理，內容豐富，這就需要花費我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者根據題目要求,講述了學校生活的幾個方面。層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補充的內容完成得也不錯。如Now let me tell you about my school life.等。這些內容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如My favorite subjects are music and biology. They are difficult but interesting.等。

考點：話題類作文。