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假如你是李華，你的朋友Bob每次遇到考試都會(huì)緊張。請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫一封信，建議他如何克服考前緊張情緒：比如平時(shí)努力學(xué)習(xí)，考前做好充分準(zhǔn)備，適當(dāng)運(yùn)動(dòng)，注意飲食健康，擁有良好的睡眠等等。信的開頭已為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
要求：1 要點(diǎn)應(yīng)全部包括，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮   2 詞數(shù)70左右。
Dear Bob,
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Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to hear that you are always nervous about tests. Here is some advice for you.
First of all, study hard and make good preparations for exams. Second, why not go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercise before an exam? By doing this, you can relax yourself. Besides, enough sleep will make you full of energy and do well in the exams. A cup of milk before going to bed might help you have a good sleep and listening to the light music is also a good way.
I hope you will find these ways useful. Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua

試題分析：本文的寫作重在理清楚文章所寫的邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)，首先說明對(duì)考試要有充分的準(zhǔn)備make good preparations for exams，其次，多出去做一些戶外的運(yùn)動(dòng)或是散步go out for a walk，然后，要保證好足夠多的睡眠，注意飲食。在寫作上要注意使用表示層次關(guān)系的詞來增強(qiáng)文章的條理性，如first of all,second,besides等。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文的寫作比較好寫，寫作過程中注意使用表建議的常用話語如：why not,you’d better,what about等，來表達(dá)所需提的建議。初中英語的作文，著重考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力，要在“準(zhǔn)”字上下功夫。在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面。對(duì)于中學(xué)作文的寫作，盡量將所學(xué)的知識(shí)運(yùn)用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊的文章，不要出現(xiàn)中式英文。