Question

2．請(qǐng)以My School Rules為題介紹一下你的學(xué)校校規(guī)，如：上課不能遲到，課堂要保持安靜，見到老師要問好，不許在教室里吃東西，不許在課堂上聽音樂、玩游戲，不要帶手機(jī)（mobile phone）到校，每天必須穿校服…可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，字?jǐn)?shù)80字以上．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名，校名．如需使用人名，校名，請(qǐng)用Mary，Mike，Guangming Middle School 代替．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
In my school，there are some rules． 我的學(xué)校有一些規(guī)則．這是一個(gè)there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
We can't eat or drink in the classroom．我們不能在教室里吃或者喝東西．or在這表示否定的并列．

解答 My School Rules
I am a middle school student．My school is No.1 Middle School．In my school，there are some rules【高分句型一，注意there be 的句型的使用】【開篇點(diǎn)明主題】．We can't arrive late for class．We must be on time．We can't fight in class．We can't run in the classroom or halls．We can't eat or drink in the classroom【高分句型二，注意or的使用】．We must eat and drink in the dining hall．We can't listen to misic in the classroom．We must listen to music in the music room【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹學(xué)校的規(guī)則】．They are quite strict．But they are useful，we can study well．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題，表明對(duì)這些規(guī)則的態(tài)度】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，多閱讀此類題材，將詞匯歸類整理；動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．