Question

短文寫作：8%

為自己設計一個旅行計劃，要包括下列問題：

1. 想去哪？為什么？

2. 想在那兒待幾天？

3. 怎么去？

4. 打算什么時候開始旅行？

5. 在這次旅行期間，打算做些什么？

要求：意思連貫、通順，詞數(shù)在60—80之間。

提示詞語：countryside, air, food and vegetables, environment, fresh, quiet, poor, give, the school things ...

Make a travel plan

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Answer 1

One possible version：

Make a travel plan

Next week，I want to go to the countryside by bus. I will go to play three days. Because the air is fresh, the sky is blue, the river is clear. In the countryside, we can eat delicious food and green vegetables. The environment is quite good and quiet. We are going to visit the Guang Ming Temple and have a picnic there. We are going to help the farmers there and do some farm work. We also want to plant many young trees to make the countryside more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要應用一般將來時，所以在寫作時，要尤其一般將來時的表達方式。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: Next week，I want to go to the countryside by bus. We are going to visit the Guang Ming Temple and have a picnic there.學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點：提綱作文。