Question

16．最近，蘇州日?qǐng)?bào)開展中學(xué)生英語作文大賽，主題是我的家鄉(xiāng)-蘇州，你也想?yún)①�，�?qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，寫一篇80字左右的文章，標(biāo)題已給出．
1，它是個(gè)歷史悠久的大城市，以園林和絲綢（silk）而出名．
2，它有5個(gè)區(qū)（district）組成，橋多，河流多．
3，過去道路狹窄，人們步行或乘船出行．
 4，這些年來，蘇州已經(jīng)發(fā)生了巨大的變化…（請(qǐng)寫出一個(gè)變化）
 5，蘇州人熱愛大自然，保護(hù)環(huán)境，力爭(zhēng)把家鄉(xiāng)變成國際化大城市．
 6，蘇州一年四季都很美，它是居住的好地方．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In the past，the roads were so narrow that people went outside only on foot or by boat．
句中涉及的結(jié)構(gòu)為"so…that…如此…以致于…"，這句話意為：在過去道路是如此的狹窄，人們只能步行或乘船出行．
高分句型二：
We try to make our hometown an international city．
句中涉及的短語有："try to do sth  努力做某事"；"make sb/sth+名詞/形容詞 使…成為…"．這句話意為：我們努力把家鄉(xiāng)變成國際化城市．

解答 My hometown Suzhou is a big city with a long history．It is famous for its gardens and silk．It is made up of five districts．There are many rivers and bridges in Suzhou．（介紹蘇州文化）
   In the past，the roads were so narrow that people went outside only on foot or by boat．【高分句型一】But Suzhou has changed a lot over the years．Now we can see wide and clean roads with many trees on both sides．There are many tall buildings everywhere．（蘇州的變化）
   People here love the natural beauty and we also protect the environment．We try to make our hometown an international city．【高分句型二】Suzhou is beautiful in any season，so I think it's a good place to live．（蘇州的環(huán)境）

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