Question

為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活動，學校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語征文比賽�，F(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)所給提示內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇參賽短文。

提示：1. 衣著整潔；待人有禮，樂于助人；2. 遵守交通規(guī)則，不闖紅燈；

3. 保護環(huán)境，不亂扔垃圾；4.補充兩句個人觀點。

參考詞匯：respect(尊敬); be polite to; obey(遵守) the traffic rules;

要求:(1)內(nèi)容包括所提供的信息及要點，可適當發(fā)揮，但不要逐條翻譯；

(2)不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息。

（3）詞數(shù)：80詞左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

                             How to Behave Well?

     In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in our life.

     First, we should keep our clothes clean and tidy. Be polite and friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. Then, our city should be kept clean every day. Don’t throw rubbish everywhere. Finally, we should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

If everyone behaves well, our city will be more and more beautiful in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。寫出順序的詞來表達文意更清楚。完成提示詞時也要符合事實。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文進行了較為全面的說明，能用簡短的詞匯表達出提綱的內(nèi)容，并且進行了適當?shù)奶幚�，準確的添加自己的觀點，同時使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點：提綱作文。