Question

閱讀完以上短文，你想起我們每年歡度的春節(jié)嗎？哪年的春節(jié)令你印象深刻難忘？請(qǐng)你寫一篇題為“My unforgettable Chinese New Year ”的短文，內(nèi)容包括：
你何時(shí)度過(guò)難忘的春節(jié)？
你當(dāng)時(shí)在哪里，與誰(shuí)一起度過(guò)，做了哪些事情？
希望每年的春節(jié)都過(guò)得開(kāi)心。
要求：1.短文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，意思連貫，語(yǔ)言流暢，語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確，符合邏輯；
2. 80詞左右；不得在文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。
My unforgettable Chinese New Year
Chinese New Year is the most important festival for all of us.                           
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                               

Answer 1

Chinese New Year is the most important festival for all of us. When I was nine years old, I went to my hometown---Chaoyang with my parents for the Sprint festival. I was so impressed. On the first day, I got up early and wore my new clothes . My parents , grandpa and grandma gave me red envelopes . I felt so happy . Then we bought some gifts to visit my aunt, uncle and other relatives. We got toghter and had a big meal.
At night, I lighted a lot of firecrackers with my friends. To begin with, I didn’t know what to do . Luckily, a boy called XiaoGang helped me a lot. At last, the whole sky was bright. How beautiful it was.
I hope I will be happy in every Chinese NewYear.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹三方面的內(nèi)容，你何時(shí)度過(guò)難忘的春節(jié)？你當(dāng)時(shí)在哪里，與誰(shuí)一起度過(guò)，做了哪些事情？希望每年的春節(jié)都過(guò)得開(kāi)心。根據(jù)敘述的事件，可知應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，主要應(yīng)用第一人稱。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文在寫作時(shí)注意到了時(shí)態(tài)的變化而且使用了大量的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。. On the first day,Then, At last,表示時(shí)間順序的短語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用使文章的表達(dá)更富有條理。