Question

7．你的朋友Tom昨天與父母發(fā)生了爭(zhēng)吵．起因是Tom沒(méi)有與父母分擔(dān)家務(wù)．他現(xiàn)在很苦惱，不知道該怎么做．請(qǐng)你給Tom提出至少兩點(diǎn)建議以及為什么建議他這樣做．
要求：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名；
3．詞數(shù)：60-80個(gè)．（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
Dear Tom，
I heard you argued with your parents yesterday，because you didn't help with the housework．                   

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①So，you should learn to do some housework now．所以，你現(xiàn)在應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)做家務(wù)．句子中l(wèi)earn to do sth學(xué)習(xí)做某事，后面跟to引導(dǎo)的動(dòng)詞不定式形式；do some housework 表示做家務(wù)．
②So I think it is good for students to do some housework．所以我認(rèn)為學(xué)生做一些家務(wù)是有好處的．句子中think后面跟的是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句；it is good for sb to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是有好處的．

解答 Dear Tom，
    I heard you argued with your parents yesterday，because you didn't help with the housework．Is it good for students to do some housework？（引出話題）Some people think students need not do any housework．They think the only thing students need do is to study well．（一些人對(duì)此的看法）I don't think so．It is good for students to do some housework for three reason．（我的看法）
    First，to do some housework can make you independent．You can't depend on others all your life．So，you should learn to do some housework now．（高分句型）Second，to do some housework can keep you healthy and strong，some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise．Finally，to do some housework can share your parents'work．They must be happy if you say"Have a rest，and I will do the housework"（我給Tom的建議建議及原因）
    So I think it is good for students to do some housework．（高分句型）（結(jié)束語(yǔ)）

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