Question

根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，以“My hometown” 為題寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。

Dongtai	In the past	At present
Environment	narrow and dirty roads, rubbish everywhere, large open spaces	wide and clean streets , green trees on both sides , shops and tall buildings
Life	small old houses , listen to the radio or watch TV	new flats , computers and the Internet , mobile phones
Transport	on foot or by bicycle	by bus or taxi , have own cars
Opinion	enjoy a comfortable life

My hometown
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Answer 1

　My hometown Dongtai used to have narrow and dirty roads.The rubbish was everywhere,and there were many large open spaces. People lived in old houses.They only listened to the radio or watched TV. In the past, people could only go there by bicycle or on foot.
However, it has changed a lot over the years. Now there are many wide and clean streets. On both sides of the streets,there are lots of green trees.Many shops and tall buildings are built.People live in new flats.They have computers and they can look for information on the Internet.Most people have mobile phones.Many buses pass here now, people can take the taxi.Many people even have their own cars.People are enjoying a comfortable life.

試題分析：這是一篇圖表作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如：used to have narrow and dirty roads. On both sides of the streets, go there by bicycle or on foot. it has changed a lot over the years.Many shops and tall buildings are built. have their own cars. People are enjoying a comfortable life.等，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。