Question

今年是建黨90周年，90年來，在黨的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)下，我們的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了翻天覆地的變化。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格中的漢語(yǔ)提示，寫一篇題為“The changes to our hometown”的英語(yǔ)短文，介紹家鄉(xiāng)巨變，并談?wù)勀愕母惺�。�?nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：                                                   

過去	1、環(huán)境 、住房情況 3、交通方式 4、……
現(xiàn)在	1、生活條件的變化 、環(huán)境的變化
感受	1、人們過上了幸福的生活 、……

要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下連貫；）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等。
The changes to our hometown
Our hometown has changed a lot over the past 90 years..                           
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Answer 1

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In the past, the environment was very good. The air was blue and the river was clean. People lived in small houses. People went to the city center on foot or by bus.
But now the changes have taken place in my hometown.. The lives are becoming better . The environment was not as good as before. The river is not clean. The fish in the river is dead. The lives of the people have improved a lot. People go to the city centre by bus , train or by car.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化。題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，注意文后要適當(dāng)談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋Ｔ趯懽鲿r(shí)，由于本文涉及過去現(xiàn)在的時(shí)間，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。