Question

假設(shè)你們班將在下周舉行一次討論會(huì)，主題是“How to relax after the exams”。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，發(fā)表一下自己的看法。
提示：
● 去旅游，親近大自然；
參加娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)，如看電影、聽(tīng)音樂(lè)、看街頭表演等；
進(jìn)行體育鍛煉；
你的建議。
要求：1. 內(nèi)容包括以上提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 70詞左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。
參考詞匯：go around and get close to nature 去旅游，親近大自然
How to relax after the exams？
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Answer 1

How to relax after the exams？We can go around and get close to nature, such as climbing mountains, going hiking , go boating and so on. We can take part in some entertainments, for example, going to the movies, listening to the music or watching street shows .We can aslo play sports like running, swimming or playing all kinds of balls.
In my opinon, we’d better go to the science museum with our parents. We can not only relax but also learn something that we couldn’t learn from our textbooks.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者分兩部分別寫考試過(guò)后放松的多種方式和作者的建議。全文用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如 go around ，get close to，such as， and so on，take part in ，for example，listen to the music，In my opinon，had better,not only...but also等短語(yǔ)，文中還用到了定語(yǔ)從句that we couldn’t learn from our textbooks。文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。