Question

以My Dragon Boat Festival為題，寫一篇英語短文，介紹你在今年端午節(jié)中所做的活動。

注意事項：

1．內(nèi)容包括：What did you do? How did you feel?

2．提示詞語：have one day off; get together; rice dumplings and eggs, taste; Dragon Boat

race，可根據(jù)英文提示詞語，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。

3．短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。

4．詞數(shù)70左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

This year's Dragon Boat Festival was on June, 2.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

On that day, our school had one day off. So we students were very happy to do something we’d like to do. In the morning, I got up early. My families and I got together to make rice dumplings, which we Chinese call zongzi. We also made some eggs and other delicious food. We were very happy to taste these delicious food. On that day’s afternoon, we watched a Dragon Boat race , where many people were rowing a big boat together. It was so great a game that many people would like to see by the river. We had a good time on that day.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知本文要用一般過去時和第一人稱，寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如定語從句we students were very happy to do something we’d like to do和My families and I got together to make rice dumplings, which we Chinese call zongzi..等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點：提綱作文。