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17．九年級(jí)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)壓力巨大．為了舒緩學(xué)習(xí)壓力，你們班上周末組織了一次徒步（Hiking）活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以Tom的名義向你的網(wǎng)友Bob描述一下活動(dòng)過(guò)程及感受．
活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：
1．集合時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)：上周六上午8：00，學(xué)校大門(mén)口．
2．交通工具：校車．
3．徒步地點(diǎn)：紅樹(shù)林公園．終點(diǎn)：深圳灣體育館．
4．自帶食物和水，大家一起分享．
5．午餐后進(jìn)行了一些戶外活動(dòng)，比如：玩游戲，講故事等等．
6．下午4：00 返校．
參考詞匯：
紅樹(shù)林公園：Mangrove Forest Park
深圳灣體育館：Shenzhen Bay Stadium
戶外活動(dòng)：outdoor activity
注意：
1．寫(xiě)作中必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯．
2．詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．寫(xiě)作中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名和姓名．
Dear Bob，
In order to relieve our study stress，we went hiking in the Mangrove Forest Park last weekend． 
                                          
Yours，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Because it was far from our school，we took the school bus．因?yàn)榫嚯x我們學(xué)校比較遠(yuǎn)，所以我們乘校車去．
because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句的應(yīng)用；take the school bus 乘校車
【高分句型二】
There were some flowers whose names we knew and others we didn't．有一些花，我們叫得上名字，有一些叫不上名字．
There be句型的應(yīng)用；定語(yǔ)從句"whose names we knew"的應(yīng)用

解答 Dear Bob，
In order to relieve our study stress，we went hiking in the Mangrove Forest Park last weekend．We gathered at 8：00AM last Saturday in front of our school gate．Because it was far from our school，we took the school bus．【高分句型一】
It was a very fun thing that we could carry foods and drinks by ourselves and shared them with our classmates．We were singing and laughing along the way to the Forest Park．In the park，we saw many kinds of trees and flowers．There were some flowers whose names we knew and others we didn't．【高分句型二】I was glad to learn something from this hiking．
After the pleasant lunch time，we also had some outdoor activities，like games，stories and so on．
The hiking ended in the Shenzhen Bay Stadium and we went back to school at 4：00PM．
I had a nice weekend because of this hiking．Hoping we can go hiking some day．
Yours，
Tom

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