Question

過(guò)年燃放爆竹是中國(guó)人的傳統(tǒng),但是近年來(lái)越來(lái)越多的人同過(guò)年不放爆竹。假如你是Green Club的一員,請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一封倡議書,介紹燃放爆竹可能帶來(lái)的危害,并呼吁同學(xué)們過(guò)年時(shí)少放或不放爆竹。

注意：1)所寫內(nèi)容必須包括圖示中的信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2)文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3)表達(dá)清楚,語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫,書寫規(guī)范；

4)詞數(shù)不少于90。文章的開(kāi)頭已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：set off firecrackers燃放爆竹gas氣體(可數(shù)名詞)

Dear all, It’s a Chinese tradition to set off firecrackers at the Spring Festival. However, more and more people have realized that firecrackers are doing more harm than good.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear all,

It’s a Chinese tradition to set off firecrackers at the Spring Festival. However, more and more people have realized that firecrackers are doing more harm than good.

Setting off the firecrackers harms the environment. First of all, it gives off many harmful gases which will pollute the air. On the Eve of the Spring Festival, the noise of the firecrackers goes on all night and makes it impossible for people to fall asleep. The next morning the ground is all covered with rubbish from firecrackers. Besides, firecrackers can cause fires if people are not careful enough. Sometimes people will get injured or even killed.

Let’s set off fewer or even no firecrackers. In this way, we will not only enjoy the festival more, but also make a difference to our environment.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們就春節(jié)時(shí)是否燃燒爆竹寫一封倡議書。我們知道，春節(jié)燃放爆竹是我們的傳統(tǒng)，但是燃放爆竹可能會(huì)帶來(lái)一些危險(xiǎn)或害處，我們需要在倡議書中來(lái)把它帶來(lái)的害處講清楚，并且呼吁青少年在過(guò)節(jié)時(shí)不要燃放爆竹。題目中已經(jīng)給我們寫好了開(kāi)頭，點(diǎn)明了主題，即春節(jié)燃放爆竹有很多的害處。接下來(lái)我們要按照這個(gè)內(nèi)容續(xù)下去，寫一寫到底有哪些害處，這些內(nèi)容是需要我們自己來(lái)補(bǔ)充的。例如，燃放爆竹可能會(huì)污染環(huán)境，可能會(huì)影響別人休息，對(duì)放爆竹的人來(lái)說(shuō)有危險(xiǎn)等等。我們要用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。最后結(jié)尾時(shí)可以對(duì)青少年不要燃放爆竹發(fā)出呼吁。這樣整篇短文的結(jié)構(gòu)就非常合理，很完整。寫作時(shí)，注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，并且多用好的詞匯和句型，使文章表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。作者按照題目要求，對(duì)過(guò)節(jié)燃放爆竹的危害進(jìn)行了闡述，主要從三個(gè)方面來(lái)說(shuō)明的。一是First of all, it gives off many harmful gases which will pollute the air.；第二個(gè)是the noise of the firecrackers goes on all night and makes it impossible for people to fall asleep.這句話中使用了句型make it impossible for sb. to do sth.，非常準(zhǔn)確；接下來(lái)是The next morning the ground is all covered with rubbish from firecrackers；下面作者用besides這個(gè)詞，表示補(bǔ)充，firecrackers can cause fires if people are not careful enough. Sometimes people will get injured or even killed。最后一段中作者向青少年們發(fā)出呼吁，過(guò)節(jié)時(shí)不要燃放爆竹，重申了主題，和文章開(kāi)頭對(duì)應(yīng)起來(lái)。整篇短文結(jié)構(gòu)合理，收尾呼應(yīng)，理由充分合理，表達(dá)流暢。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。