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7．假設(shè)你是李華，對(duì)目前中國(guó)出現(xiàn)的霧霾（the smog）天氣非常擔(dān)憂，向China Daily（中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)）的編輯寫了一封英語(yǔ)信件，希望引起人們的重視，內(nèi)容如下：

天氣狀況	霧霾天氣影響中國(guó)的許多地方
霧霾的原因	全國(guó)的工廠排放出許多廢氣；近年來(lái)城市的汽車越來(lái)越多等．空氣污染嚴(yán)重
霧霾的危害	危害人們身體健康，引發(fā)多種疾病甚至癌癥；引起交通堵塞，甚至交通事故
希  望	人們外出最好少開小車，多坐公交車、騎自行車或步行；盡量不燃放煙火，尤其春節(jié)時(shí)；選擇空氣環(huán)保產(chǎn)品；多種樹木…

參考詞匯：
廢氣：waste gas
空氣污染：air pollution
引起：cause
多種疾�。簃any kinds of illnesses
癌癥：cancers
交通堵塞：traffic jam
燃放煙火：set off fireworks
空氣環(huán)保產(chǎn)品：air-friendly products
要求：
1．詞數(shù)：70詞左右．
2．信件開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名與校名．
Dear editor，
I'm Li Hua．I'm a middle school student．I'm worried about the smog weather in my country．Can your newspaper ask people to pay much attention to it？
The smog weather has influenced many places of China．Why is it so serious？Because factories all over our country produce so much waste gas into the air，and there are more and more cars in the city in recent years，and so on．So the air pollution is becoming serious in China now．
The smog is a danger to people's life．It's harmful to our health．It can cause many kinds of illnesses，even cancers．It can also cause traffic jam，and sometimes even traffic accidents．
So I think everyone should protect the environment．When we go out，we'd better drive cars less，and try to go by bus，by bike or on foot instead．We should try not to set fireworks，especially during the Spring Festivals．It's good for people to choose air-friendly products．And we should plant more trees to make the world greener，so the air will be fresh
Thanks a lot!
Best wishes，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勳F霾的原因和危害．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1天氣狀況：霧霾天氣影響中國(guó)的許多地方
2霧霾的原因：全國(guó)的工廠排放出許多廢氣；近年來(lái)城市的汽車越來(lái)越多等．空氣污染嚴(yán)重
3霧霾的危害：危害人們身體健康，引發(fā)多種疾病甚至癌癥；引起交通堵塞，甚至交通事故
4希  望：人們外出最好少開小車，多坐公交車、騎自行車或步行；盡量不燃放煙火，尤其春節(jié)時(shí)；選擇空氣環(huán)保產(chǎn)品；多種樹木
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí) 越來(lái)越…
be harmful to 對(duì)…不利
had better do sth  最好做某事
try to do sth 盡力做某事
make…adj  讓…怎么樣

【高分句型】
1．①When we go out，②we'd better drive cars less，and ③try to go by bus，by bike or on foot④instead．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
②had better do sth  最好做某事
③try to do sth 盡力做某事
④instead 代替，放句末
2．It's good for people to choose air-friendly products．
be good for  對(duì)…有益
3．And we should plant more trees ①to make the world greener，②so the air will be fresh．
①動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)．make…adj  讓…怎么樣
②so 表示所以．連詞，表示因果關(guān)系，引出下文．

解答 Dear editor，
I'm Li Hua．I'm a middle school student．I'm worried about the smog weather in my country．Can your newspaper ask people to pay much attention to it？
The smog weather has influenced many places of China．（霧霾天氣影響中國(guó)的許多地方）Why is it so serious？Because factories all over our country produce so much waste gas into the air，（全國(guó)的工廠排放出許多廢氣）and there are more and more cars in the city in recent years，and so on．So the air pollution is becoming serious in China now．（近年來(lái)城市的汽車越來(lái)越多等．空氣污染嚴(yán)重）
The smog is a danger to people's life．It's harmful to our health．It can cause many kinds of illnesses，even cancers．（危害人們身體健康，引發(fā)多種疾病甚至癌癥）It can also cause traffic jam，and sometimes even traffic accidents．（引起交通堵塞，甚至交通事故）
So I think everyone should protect the environment．When we go out，we'd better drive cars less，and try to go by bus，by bike or on foot instead．【高分句型】（人們外出最好少開小車，多坐公交車、騎自行車或步行）We should try not to set fireworks，especially during the Spring Festivals．It's good for people to choose air-friendly products．【高分句型】And we should plant more trees to make the world greener，so the air will be fresh．【高分句型】（盡量不燃放煙火，尤其春節(jié)時(shí)；選擇空氣環(huán)保產(chǎn)品；多種樹木）
Thanks a lot!
Best wishes，
Li Hua．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全．句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致．文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性．