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我國(guó)不少城市正在推廣公共自行車，提倡人們“綠色出行，低碳生活”。現(xiàn)在某英文網(wǎng)站就此話題征文，請(qǐng)你參考下面的要點(diǎn)提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勍茝V公共自行車的好處。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

優(yōu) 勢(shì)	1. 比汽車便宜得多，每個(gè)人都買得起
	2. 在上學(xué)、上班時(shí)段交通特別繁忙，如果有更多的人選擇騎自行車，街道上就會(huì)有更少的汽車，也不會(huì)那么擁擠
	3. 有利于保護(hù)環(huán)境， 因?yàn)椤��?請(qǐng)自擬一點(diǎn))
	4. ……(請(qǐng)自擬一點(diǎn))
愿 望	……(請(qǐng)自擬一點(diǎn))

要求：1、短文內(nèi)容須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，……部分請(qǐng)自擬內(nèi)容作答；
2、詞數(shù)90左右。開(kāi)頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3、表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及本人姓名。
提示：低碳生活：low-carbon life
Now, public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. I think it’s a good thing.
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Answer 1

Now, public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. I think it's a good thing．
Firstly, bikes are much cheaper than cars and everyone can afford them. Secondly, as we know, there is heavy traffic when people go to school or work. If more people choose to ride bikes, there will be fewer cars and the streets won't be as crowded as they are now. Thirdly, we can ride bikes to keep fit. The most important thing is that riding bikes can help protect the environment because it won’t bring pollution to our environment．
I hope more and more people can ride bikes and live a low-carbon life.

試題分析：此題是提示性作文，要求根據(jù)提示及所給材料寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)作文，主要考查寫(xiě)作能力，也是對(duì)英語(yǔ)綜合知識(shí)運(yùn)用的考查，這就要求仔細(xì)分析所給提示，不要漏掉提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫(xiě)出語(yǔ)言流暢，意思連貫的文章。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章語(yǔ)言連貫，簡(jiǎn)潔明了。在文章中使用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~，為文章增色不少，同時(shí)也體現(xiàn)出作者的寫(xiě)作功底。例如：firstly，secondly，thirdly，這樣使文章層次分明，一目了然；同時(shí)還是用正確的比較級(jí)句型使文章的重點(diǎn)突出，如：If more people choose to ride bikes, there will be fewer cars and the streets won't be as crowded as they are now.（如果更多的人選擇騎自行車，汽車就會(huì)更少，街道也不會(huì)像現(xiàn)在這么擁擠）