Question

看圖，以My Room為題,寫(xiě)一篇10句話的短文。
My Room

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Answer 1

This is my room. It is very nice. There are two pictures on the wall. Under them, there is a bed. And my bag is on the bed. Next to the bed is a desk. My computer and books are on the desk. There is a chair under the desk. There is a bookshelf next to the desk. There are many books in the bookshelf. There is also a sofa in the room. I often sit in the sofa to read books.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文。圖片上是一個(gè)房間的布置。房間里東西比較多，寫(xiě)作時(shí)可按照一定的空間順序來(lái)寫(xiě)。注意主謂一致，尤其是系動(dòng)詞be的用法，以及表示方位介詞的正確使用。
【亮點(diǎn)分析】這篇作文按照一定的空間順序，將房間里的物品擺設(shè)描述清楚。文章用到了there be句型，系動(dòng)詞be的用法很準(zhǔn)確，并且用到了很多方位介詞，如on在上面, under在下面, next to在旁邊, in在里面， 等等。