Question

你校英語(yǔ)廣播站正發(fā)起“開(kāi)卷有益”的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)要求，自擬標(biāo)題寫(xiě)一篇80—100詞的短文向該站投稿。
要求：（1）指出當(dāng)前學(xué)生們對(duì)待閱讀的態(tài)度；
（2）寫(xiě)明閱讀的重要性；
（3）寫(xiě)出你自己以后的閱讀打算。
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Answer 1

Reading Books is Helpful
We can get knowledge through reading books. Most of the students think that it's helpful to read books. But is it really helpful to read all books? Many books are suitable for neither children nor adults. Some books should be prohibited. There are many books sold in markets which are full of descriptions of violenc. I don't think they are beneficial to us teenagers. So it's definitely  not helpful to open all books. As for me,I will read books that are recommended by teachers or parents. They know which are good for us. 

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文主要寫(xiě)當(dāng)前學(xué)生們對(duì)待閱讀的態(tài)度、閱讀的重要性、及自己以后的閱讀打算。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如get knowledge,Most of,neither...nor, are full of,As for等短語(yǔ)，文中還用到了賓語(yǔ)從句 that it's helpful to read books,they are beneficial to us teenagers, which are good for us;定語(yǔ)從句which are full of descriptions of violenc.；不定式做主語(yǔ) it's helpful to read books.文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。