Question

上周我校對(duì)學(xué)生課外活動(dòng)做了調(diào)查，情況如下表。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容作簡(jiǎn)單介紹。

students	activity	ideas and reasons（理由）
只有 15﹪ 的學(xué)生	每天鍛煉	有利于健康 更有利于學(xué)習(xí) 比看電視更放松
90﹪ 的學(xué)生	每周上網(wǎng)2--3次	能從中學(xué)到很多知識(shí) 是最有趣的的活動(dòng)之一
45﹪ 的學(xué)生	每天看電視	可以看到自己喜歡明星，欣賞流行歌曲 體育運(yùn)動(dòng)和才藝表演是最受歡迎的

提示詞：15﹪ 的學(xué)生    15 percent of the students   
作文要求：包括表格中所有信息。條理清晰，可以適當(dāng)拓展。字跡清楚，80詞左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

We did a surey about their activities after school.Different people have diffent ideas.Here are the results.
Only 15 percent of the students exercise every day. They think it’s good for health and it’s better for study.Also,they think,it’s more relaxing than watching TV.
90 percent of the students surf the Internet two or three times a week.They think they can learn a lot from it. And it’s one of the most interesting activities.
45percent of the students watch TV every day . They think they can see their favorite stars on it. Of course,the sports shows and talent shows are the most popular.

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表對(duì)學(xué)生課外活動(dòng)做調(diào)查的報(bào)告。主要用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第三人稱(chēng)的復(fù)數(shù)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不僅注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如be good for, learn a lot from, one of the most interesting activities Of course等。句式it’s more relaxing than watching TV,. Also, Of course等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。