Question

書面表達(dá)。（15分）
為了預(yù)防流感，保持健康，你平時(shí)都是怎樣做的？請根據(jù)下面表格中所提供的信息，以Keeping Healthy為題寫一篇60詞左右的短文,開頭已給出。

Should	Shouldn’t
Have a good eating habit	Eat too much or too little
Go to bed early	Stay up late at night
Exercise	Throw litter about

 
Keeping Healthy
As we know, health is important to us. How should we keep healthy?

Answer 1

Keeping Healthy
As we know, health is important to us. How should we keep healthy?
First, we should have a good eating habit. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat every day. We can’t eat too much or too little. Drinking enough water is a good habit. Second, we had better go to bed early. We shouldn’t stay up late at night. Third, exercising a lot is good for us. Don’t throw litter about.
If we try to do that, we will be in a good health.

試題分析：本題是圍繞健康展開敘述，首先應(yīng)該說明健康的重要性，然后，分別敘述如何才能保持健康。最后，要發(fā)出倡議，號召大家保持健康。在寫作時(shí)，本文的主語主要為第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)人稱，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。應(yīng)該盡量包括文中提示的內(nèi)容，可稍加拓展。為了使邏輯顯得更加清楚,適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞.
點(diǎn)評：本書面表達(dá)的中心是如何才能保持健康，所以應(yīng)該圍繞題目的提示進(jìn)行書寫。應(yīng)該注意表述的邏輯性和條理性。盡量用簡單的語言來表述。