Question

14．對(duì)于大家來(lái)說(shuō)，寶貴的初中學(xué)習(xí)生涯已即將走過(guò)一半，在這段時(shí)間里，肯定有很多老師在學(xué)習(xí)和生活上給了你幫助和影響，請(qǐng)你以"the most beautiful teacher in my heart"為題寫一篇短文說(shuō)說(shuō)你心目中最美的老師，為什么他（她）是你心目中最美的老師，同時(shí)并表示對(duì)他（她）的感謝．
提示詞語(yǔ)：thank you，kind，forget，be in trouble，with the help of，stay in touch
要求：
1．表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下連貫；
2．詞數(shù)：80詞左右．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
The history class which he taught was very interesting．他教的歷史課很有趣． which he taught was very interesting是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞class．
高分句型二
 he often helped us when we were in trouble．當(dāng)我們有困難時(shí)，他經(jīng)常幫助我們．這是when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，當(dāng)…時(shí)候．

解答 The most beautiful teacher in my heart
 The most beautiful teacher in my heart is my  history teacher，Mr．Li【開篇點(diǎn)明主題】．He was a very kind teacher with thick glasses．The history class which he taught was very interesting【高分句型一，注意定語(yǔ)從句的使用】，he often helped us when we were in trouble．【高分句型二，注意時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】He always told us to study hard and tried our best to make a contribution torealizing our modern motherland．With the help of him，we we were good at history．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹老師】He is so good a teacher that I will not forget him forever!【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．