Question

節(jié)約資源、反對浪費(fèi)需要我們每個人的參與和努力。請根據(jù)下面的提示向大家倡導(dǎo)低碳節(jié)約生活。要求80詞左右。
提示：1、騎自行車或坐公交車上學(xué)；
2、不使用塑料袋，出門前關(guān)燈和電視；
3、不使用一次性筷子（disposable chopsticks）, 以便減少浪費(fèi)；
4、有些飯店也有好點(diǎn)子，如：顧客少點(diǎn)菜；吃光所有的菜可打折（discount）;吃不完要求打包帶走（pack away）等。
It’s our duty to reduce waste and save resources.____________________________
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Answer 1

It’s our duty to reduce waste and save resources. As people waste more and more things, it is necessary for us to reduce waste. Now let me introduce some good ways.
First, we can go to school by bike or by bus. Riding a bike, or taking a bus do harm to the environment.
Second, don’t use plastic bags now. I always take a cloth bag with me.
Third, whenever you go out, please remember to turn off the lights and TV.
Fourth, do not use disposable chopsticks, to reduce waste.
Fifth, some restaurants also come up with some good ways, such as: letting the customers order less; eating all the food can receive a discount; if the customers do not eat all the food, they should pack it away.

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如：It’s necessary for us to do sth.whenever的使用，調(diào)理清晰（first，second，third，fourth，fifth）。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。