Question

16．目前安慶正在積極開(kāi)展創(chuàng)建"全國(guó)文明城市"（a national civilized city）活動(dòng)．作為一名中學(xué)生應(yīng)該積極參與此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，可以從身邊小事做起，從校園文明開(kāi)始，和父母共同行動(dòng)起來(lái)．假若你是李明，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一份倡議書(shū)，建議青少年在校園和其它公共場(chǎng)所做到：
1、愛(ài)護(hù)并美化校園環(huán)境；2、尊敬師長(zhǎng)，團(tuán)結(jié)同學(xué)，誠(chéng)信互信；3、遵守學(xué)校規(guī)則，積極參加學(xué)校活動(dòng)；4、告訴父母…
注意：1、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名；2、將第四點(diǎn)作適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充；3、詞數(shù)80-100，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear friends，
Our city is trying to set up a national civilized city．As a student，I think It's our duty to do something for it．What should we do？
                                                                
Let's start now to make our city better．
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
I think it's our duty to do something for it．我認(rèn)為為它做點(diǎn)事是我們的責(zé)任．這是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，I  think 是主句，后面的是賓語(yǔ)從句．it's our duty to do something 做某事是我們的責(zé)任．
高分句型二 
it's necessary to tell our parents the importance of being polite in public and of taking up good habits．有必要告訴我們的父母在公共場(chǎng)合禮貌和養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣的重要性  這是it is+形容詞+（for sb．） to do  sth．句型，對(duì)于…來(lái)說(shuō)…是…的．

解答 Dear friends，
Our city is trying to set up a national civilized city．As a student，I think it's our duty to do something for it【高分句型一，注意從句的使用】．What should we do？First of all，we should try our best to protect the environment．We should pick up litter on the road and throw it into the dustbin．We mustn't pick flowers or step on the grass．On the contrary，we should plant more trees and flowers to make our school more beautiful．【要點(diǎn)一，愛(ài)護(hù)并美化校園環(huán)境】Second，we should fill the world with love．We should show respect to our teachers，and also care for each other and help those in need．The most important point is all of us must be honest in our daily lives．【要點(diǎn)二，尊敬師長(zhǎng)，團(tuán)結(jié)同學(xué)，誠(chéng)信互信】Finally，we should obey the school rules and take an active part in school activities【要點(diǎn)三，遵守學(xué)校規(guī)則，積極參加學(xué)校活動(dòng)】．What's more，it's necessary to tell our parents the importance of being polite in public and of taking up good habits【高分句型二，注意it is+形容詞+for sb．to do sth．句型的使用】．We'd better ask them to join us．【要點(diǎn)四，告訴父母…】
Let's start now to make our city better．
Li Ming

點(diǎn)評(píng) 動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語(yǔ)，句式等問(wèn)題．注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，句子要通順連貫，沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤．