Question

根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示及要求,以Sally’s Dream為題寫(xiě)一篇短文.
提示: 1.Sally是一個(gè)中學(xué)生,她想成為一名職業(yè)演員.
2.她同時(shí)也是一名志愿者,經(jīng)常參加一些志愿者服務(wù)活動(dòng),業(yè)余時(shí)間她還上表演課.
3.現(xiàn)在她遇到了一些麻煩,無(wú)錢(qián)上表演課.她想出了許多辦法,如: 打電話給家長(zhǎng)、主動(dòng)輔導(dǎo)孩子的美術(shù)、張貼啟事尋找工作掙錢(qián)等。
4．問(wèn)題解決了，她可以繼續(xù)上課了，她的夢(mèng)想會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)的。
要求：1、條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。
2、不少于80個(gè)單詞。
Sally’s Dream
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Answer 1

Sally is a middle school student; she wants to become a professional actor. She is also a volunteer, often takes part in some volunteer service activities. In her spare time, she also has acting lessons.
But she has some trouble now. She had no money for the acting lessons. She has come up with many ways to solve the problem. She made a phone call to the parents to help children's art. Also, she posted notice to find work to earn money.
So far, the problem has been solved and she can continue to have her classes. I hope that her dream will come true.

解析試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，所給內(nèi)容十分詳細(xì)，在組織文章時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)和句式結(jié)構(gòu)正確就可以了。提醒學(xué)生注意用一些短語(yǔ)或句子來(lái)使上下文讀起來(lái)流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文注意到了敘述事件時(shí)的時(shí)態(tài)變化，能適當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用連詞和國(guó)定短語(yǔ)。文章要點(diǎn)全，幾乎沒(méi)有語(yǔ)病錯(cuò)誤。能適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。