Question

同學(xué)們，“健康大于財(cái)富”，良好的衛(wèi)生、飲食習(xí)慣，健康的體魄，充沛的精力會(huì)給我們的學(xué)習(xí)帶來(lái)很大的幫助。那么， 你認(rèn)為我們?cè)撛鯓颖３纸】的�？�?qǐng)你以Keeping Healthy為題說(shuō)說(shuō)你的看法。要求詞數(shù):80詞左右。

提示：1）飯前洗手；2）多喝水；3）多吃蔬菜和水果；4）經(jīng)常做運(yùn)動(dòng)；

有病需立刻去就醫(yī)。

Answer 1

As we all know , good health is more important than wealth. How should we keep healthy? I think we should have a good eating habit, live in a clean environment and keep active. These are very necessary for our health. First, we should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat every day. Drinking enough water is a good habit. Second, open the windows or door to keep the air fresh. We should keep our bodies and the environment clean. Don’t throw litter about. Third, taking a lot of exercises is good for us.

In a word, health is very important to us. If we try to do so, we will be healthy.

【解析】

試題解析：

這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱(chēng)，一般現(xiàn)在及將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如: As we all know就我們所知；a good eating habit好的飲食習(xí)慣；throw litter about亂扔垃圾等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,讓文章更出彩。