Question

19．"爸爸，怎么做才是愛國(guó)？"
"孩子，關(guān)愛家人、同學(xué)，勤奮學(xué)習(xí)，遵守交通規(guī)則，不亂扔垃圾…做好自己該做的事情，就是愛國(guó)．"
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上對(duì)話，說(shuō)讜在日常學(xué)習(xí)、生活中怎樣做，才能體現(xiàn)我們的愛國(guó)情懷？
要求：
1．要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
2．詞數(shù)：80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)）；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
Love Our Motherland
It's our duty to love our motherland．And what should we do？                                            

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
   obey the traffic rules while we are on the road．當(dāng)我們?cè)诼飞蠒r(shí)要遵守交通規(guī)則．這是while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，當(dāng)…時(shí)候． 
 高分句型二
   if we do our part，our motherland will certainly be better and more powerful 如果我們盡自己的一份力量，我們的祖國(guó)一定會(huì)更好更加強(qiáng)大．這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句是一般將來(lái)時(shí)，從句用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．

解答 Love Our Motherland
      It's our duty to love our motherland．And what should we do？We can do it in many ways．【開頭點(diǎn)明主題】
First，we should love our family members and get on well with our classmates．Try our best to help the people in need．Second，as a student，to study hard is a must．It's quite important for us．Third，obey the traffic rules while we are on the road【高分句型一，注意時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】．Fourth，we had better put the litter into the dustbin instead of throwing it about．Last but not least，we are supposed to care for the flowers，grass and trees around us  It's easy to make it．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹怎樣做才能體現(xiàn)我們的愛國(guó)情懷】
    In a word，if we do our part，our motherland will certainly be better and more powerful【高分句型二，注意if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

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