Question

假設(shè)你是Mary, 你的好朋友Jane經(jīng)常不吃早餐就上學(xué)，而且她也很少吃肉和魚。最近她時常覺得胃痛、疲勞。請根據(jù)以下提示詞，用英語給她寫一封信，告訴她在飲食習(xí)慣上的不足及應(yīng)該怎么做。

提示：eating habits, eat regularly, different foods

要求：語句通順，語法正確，70詞左右（所給開頭不計入總詞數(shù)）。

Dear Jane,

I’m sorry to hear that you often have a stomachache and feel tired. I think

 

 

 

 

 

Yours,

Mary

 

Answer 1

Dear Jane,

I’m sorry to hear that you often have a stomachache and feel tired. I think you have unhealthy eating habbits. First, you don’t eat regularly. All of us should have three meals a day. A good breakfast can give us energy and help us work well in the morning. So it’s bad for health if you go to school without breakfast. Second, it’s necessary for us to have different kinds of food because they can help us in different ways. For example, meat and fish help our bones grow. In short, healthy eating is important for us. You should learn how to eat healthily.

Best withes to you.

Yours,

Mary

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，所給材料要點清晰，要求明確，內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生生活，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真審題，勾勒要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文中要注意人稱、時態(tài)以及主謂一致問題。同時注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文能夠根據(jù)寫作提示和要求，較好地把與寫作相關(guān)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行歸納整合，內(nèi)容覆蓋所有要點，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯；同時，文章靈活使用序數(shù)詞，使文章自然流暢。一些常用的句式和短語的使用，為文章增色不少。在平時的學(xué)習(xí)中注意加強練筆，掌握一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：提示性作文。