Question

2013年，湖南衛(wèi)視明星親子真人秀節(jié)目《爸爸去哪兒》連續(xù)十期收視奪魁，并問鼎年度上星頻道中收視最高的季播節(jié)目。你班同學(xué)也非常喜歡看，并關(guān)于“什么樣的爸爸才是好爸爸”展開了討論，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的表格提示，用英語簡(jiǎn)要的介紹并表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)。
注：詞數(shù)80-100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。

大家的觀點(diǎn)	特點(diǎn)
大部分學(xué)生	和孩子做朋友，和孩子一起玩，讓孩子開心
一些學(xué)生	孩子犯錯(cuò)時(shí)嚴(yán)肅批評(píng)（criticize），幫助孩子進(jìn)步
少數(shù)學(xué)生	細(xì)心照顧孩子，孩子可以依靠爸爸
你	……

The other day, we had a discussion about what kind of father is a good father._____________________            
                                                                                               

Answer 1

The other day,we had a discussion about what kind of father is a good father.
Most students thought that a good father could make friends with children,play with them and make them happy. Some students believed that a good father must criticize children when they made mistakes and at the same time he should help them to make progress. A few students felt that good fathers could take good care of children,and children could depend on them.
But I think a good father can give us courage,he always encourages me never to give up and leads me to success.   

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】
這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: some students believed that 一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為，at the same time 同時(shí)，make progress 取得進(jìn)步，depend on 依賴，give up 放棄等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。