Question

假設(shè)Daniel是你的好朋友，下面是他的個(gè)人信息，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以“Daniel's dream”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

具體要求：

1．不少于70詞，開(kāi)頭己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2．語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整。

3．內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

4．參考詞匯：decide v．決定

 

Answer 1

Daniel's dream

Daniel is my good friend. He is short and fat. He is not good at math and art. But recently his dream is to be a policeman. There are many books about policeman in his room and he often reads them. These days he is watching a police movie and he thinks policemen are very great. In order to make his dream come true,he decides to change his life style.Firstly, eat more vegetables and fruit and exercise to make him healthy and strong. Secondly ,work hard at all subjects at school. Thirdly, read more books at home.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文主要寫(xiě)Daniel的外貌、學(xué)習(xí)、夢(mèng)想，全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如be good a, in order to, come true,,work hard at ,at school, at home 等短語(yǔ)；目的狀語(yǔ)從句 In order to make his dream come true，賓語(yǔ)從句he thinks policemen are very great；there be句型There are many books about policeman in his room ；不定式做表語(yǔ) to be a policeman;使用了層次副詞Firstly,Secondly ,Thirdly,令文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。