Question

18．回顧三年的初中生活，父母的教誨與支持始終伴你成長，使你進步．那些發(fā)生在你與父母之間的故事，看似平淡卻值得回味與珍藏．請以"The story of My Progress"為題，寫一篇文章．
要求：1．講述一件發(fā)生在你與父母之間的事情，可適度發(fā)揮．
2．詞數(shù)80左右，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名與學校名稱．
The Story of My Progress
My progress has connected with my mother．（開篇點題）
Three years ago，I was a shy girl．I was afraid to speak in public．My mother was worried about that．One day，my mother heard that a speech competition would be held in my school．【高分句型一】she encouraged me to take part in the activity．At first，I was shocked by her advice，but I did not want to let her down，so I agreed．During that period，my mother often took me to the park to practice． I still remembered that day clearly．When I won the first prize，my mother smiled happily．【高分句型二】（回憶過去的事情）
Now I am an outgoing and confident girl．Thanks to my mother's encouragement and company，I have made such great progress．（感謝媽媽）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
One day，my mother heard that a speech competition would be held in my school．
句中"that a speech competition would be held in my school"為賓語從句，這句話意為：有一天，我的媽媽聽說一場演講比賽將會在我們學校舉辦．
高分句型二：
When I won the first prize，my mother smiled happily．
句中"When I won the first prize"為時間狀語從句，這句話意為：當我獲獎的時候，我的媽媽開心地笑了．

解答 The Story of My Progress
My progress has connected with my mother．（開篇點題）
Three years ago，I was a shy girl．I was afraid to speak in public．My mother was worried about that．One day，my mother heard that a speech competition would be held in my school．【高分句型一】she encouraged me to take part in the activity．At first，I was shocked by her advice，but I did not want to let her down，so I agreed．During that period，my mother often took me to the park to practice． I still remembered that day clearly．When I won the first prize，my mother smiled happily．【高分句型二】（回憶過去的事情）
Now I am an outgoing and confident girl．Thanks to my mother's encouragement and company，I have made such great progress．（感謝媽媽）

點評 考生需根據(jù)所提供的信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，仔細構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識